September 12

Learn to “see” your writing at the sentence level

Purdue OWL on Active versus Passive Voice

Take the most updated draft of your current writing assignment and look for “viral words” that can weaken your writing.

  • are, was, were, been, be, being
  • have, had, has
  • get, got
  • do, did
  • just, really, very, like, a lot, so
  • and

Before proofreading your final draft for submission cut your viral words by half.


Posted September 12, 2017 by mrsscales207 in category Language Arts

About the Author

My life has taken many paths. I grew up in Farmland, Indiana and graduated from Monroe Central High School in 1979. Yes I know that seems like a long time ago to most of you. After I graduated from High School, I went into the U. S. Navy. Not a lot of women enlisted in the Navy back then. Boot camp was still segregated (that means there were only women in my boot camp) and yes, boot camp is as bad as they say it is. I survived though and began seeing a little more of the world than just our lovely corn and soy bean fields of Indiana. I was an advanced avionics technician and worked on F14 Tomcat jets in the Navy. Back then women couldn't go on ships but I was stationed in Bermuda for a little over a year. Bermuda is beautiful and the people are warm and friendly. I married my husband while in the Navy and we eventually moved to Minnesota.

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